Planning Storyboard for Walmart Great Value water bottle commercial

First Scene- During this scene, I will be filming my backyard as the establishing shot of my commercial. I will use a tilt to start the scene. First, the camera would appear as it is coming out from the grass then I would rotate it to get the whole feel and grasp of the setting. The circular path, buildings, grass, and fence would be showing in this shot. Then the camera would go back in the grass to end the scene. Second Scene- In this next scene, I was supposed to be the one running and starting the scene, but there has been a little change of plan. My younger brother Joshua, who is now the main star, would be introduced. He is going to be wearing a shirt with gym shorts and sneakers or cleats. I will use a long shot to introduce the scene, but first, the camera would come out of the grass and tilted vertically up. This would allow for him to seem as he was coming from afar and is now getting closer. As he gets closer the shot would turn from a long to medium shot. Third Scene- ...